Here is the original poem:
This Is Just To Say
I have eaten
the plums
that were in
the icebox
and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast.
Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold.
-- William Carlos Williams
Here is my attempt (it's autobiographical, even):
This is just to say that
I ate your chocolate chip cookie dough ice cream
from the Happy Harry's
and which apparently,
you were
saving for a before-bed snack
Lucy ate some too.
Forgive us
it was chocolatey
and chippy
and so sweet.
-- Kirsten
And here is Richard's entry, in his favorite creative style, LOLcats (click on the picture to make it bigger):

2 comments:
This Is Just To Say
I have eaten
almost everything
that was in
the icebox
and which
you were probably
going to eat
later in the week.
Forgive me
the fridge was broken
lukewarm
and almost rancid.
True story
This is just to say...
I love these poems.
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